miércoles, 9 de marzo de 2011

About Me


Hi! I am Felipe Andres Quitian Ochoa.
I am fifteen years old.
I live in Bucaramanga.
I study at comfenalco school and I'm tenth grade.
I am happy, solidarity and tolerant.
My favorite food is spaghetti and hamburger.
My favorite sport is basketball also play football.
My activities are watching TV, use the computer, play sports and out with friends. 




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3 comentarios:

  1. Gresi Valesca Alvarado Rios20 de marzo de 2011, 16:46

    Hello Felipe:)

    Remember: isn´t "My favorite sport is basketball ALSO play football"
    Is: "My favorite sport is basketball,BUT ALSO play football"

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  2. Jorge Nigrinis21 de marzo de 2011, 8:55

    Felipe!!! ;)
    you doesn't use connectors.
    use: but, before, and, etc.

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  3. Diomer Florez21 de marzo de 2011, 16:26

    Felipe! ^^
    Use Connectors ;)
    And, finally, But, Then

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